MAGPIE TALES: You Would or You Wood
Your half-clasped hand looks so harmless now, its blow released and quickly becoming an ashy memory.
It's hard to believe how different we were when it all began. Your freshly sanded face held such promise, the springs in your legs never creaking. We felt such synchronicity and complementary hues.
I trusted you without question as I grabbed your hand, ready to be led on an unknown path that I felt confident offered unlimited adventure and compassionate companionship.
How soon we found ourselves in the red room, where the taunting led to pushing, the doubts and dread mounted to be confirmed by your splintering words and creaking drama.
And it ends here, on the dark, lonely street of departure. Your final blow released without regret.
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15 Comments:
Strangely compelling, nice work with the photo prompt.
Very interesting. Quite a graphic piece. Death by ....?
Okay, now I'm going to have to get my little wooden model guy a companion.
Wonderful photo play!
Sun Dance Hall - I knew I had those wooden figures around here for a reason.
Little Hat - Not death, just a whack on the back of the head.
Willow - Just make sure they get along.
Vicki - But they didn't play nicely!
how cool your interpretation and your play with the models...sad, that blow of finality...
Brian - A few splinters flew, a broken heart and you move on. There is always another modeling gig calling and reason for hope.
I like the imagery this line evokes, "And it ends here, on the dark, lonely street of departure." Nice story. Love your added touch of illustration.
Stevie - It does look like a lonely street.
And one left pine-ing for the other?
Love the cinematography!
Peter - I was actually thinking about making a stop motion version of this and still may do so.
Brilliant! Loved the creative illustration of your words.
Ronda - Thanks! Wooden words work wonders.
Yaa yes.. true love, gone south!
Great take on the theme!
:) The Bach
This was splendid, witty and engaging...
...rob
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